Mess of feelings
Sometimes I feel I'm going to blow upSometimes I feel I'd better give up
Days pass one after the other
Things won't ever change ,then why to bother
I'm really confused..was I wrong?!
or it's their daily upset song?!
I missed the days I used to laugh
but now it disappears with a flash
Oh dear .. the same feeling here & baddest =(
ReplyDeleteHope 4 u a laughing's days ^^
& be happy alll ur life .. ameen
Keep going
u make me cry .. Renna ... ^^
ReplyDeleteit's amazing .. but i have a note .. if u allow mine 2 put it .. ^^
the last word .. from 2 last line .. they r something different way in sound ..
don't depends by the written letter only .. but u need 2 but something have same pronouns between laugh & flash .. they like laf & flash ..
sorry my teacher .. maybe it's wrong note ..
but i like ur poem .. a lot .. really i feel happy when i read it ... :)
Keep doning ..& .. Good Luck in ur life... ^^
so deeeeeeeeeeep
ReplyDeleteNice words girl