Don't Go Away
Please don't go away..Don't believe what people always say...
In their eyes the look of envy...
We want together to walk the same way...
My respect isn't fake... I dream about you when I'm awake...
If my mind tried to betray ...oh dear my heart will never obey...
So please don't you go away...
Don't run and hide from our golden ray...
Don't ever leave me ...
Without you I can't find my way...
I like the poem so much pink lavender it is full of sensitive feelings
ReplyDeleteSo sweet .. but i suggest that whenever u write something .. do not post it right the way .. give ur self sometime and have a look at it again
ReplyDeleteu may end up with better wordss and less mistakes
and i do not mean that u have mistakes here :)
keep it up
Thanks for the comment I'll keep it mind and I check my poems before submmiting them .
ReplyDeleteIf you have any other specific comments I'll be glad to know it
and by the way I wrote this poem a year ago and I felt like I wanna share it with everyone here.
helloooo
ReplyDeletei really really enjoyed at ur blog
u r great poet :)
wish u good luck
my best wishes 2 u :))