Seventeen
Haunted by the number seventeenIt follows me where ever I'm seen
I know it's awkward
It makes me look backward
On whom I lean
They are seventeen
They're whom I care
without being aware
It looks I'm cursed
but with seventeen I'm Merced
To Whom I care ....without being aware......To my seventeen years old best Friends^_^
Since I am seventeen you are my best friend I have to say I liked it ... On the other hand seventeen years old people will not stay seventeen forever... It is great and I really enjoyed it and some how I feel it is inspired from me :P
ReplyDeletewow ..
ReplyDeleteI like it soo much ^^
great as usual ^^
Keep going .. & waiting 4 more ^^
They're whom I care
ReplyDeletewithout being aware
deeply touched by those words
ya salaaam...^_^
ReplyDeletei feel honoured :)
Wow ..
ReplyDeleteWomen .. I adore this poem ..
it's Very cool .. like the balloon ... lol ..<< He try 2 do like u ...hhhh
Keep going Renna .. u r the best girl in the universe ..
Regards : XEROX
wooow .. Women .. gr8 poem
ReplyDeleteI adore that .. ta ja sis .. i'm 17 .. hhhh
it's cool like balloon .. lool ..<< he try 2 do st like u .. hhhhhh
Keep doing .. Renna .. u r the best girl n the universe .. ^^
Regards :: XEROX
Cuuuuute words
ReplyDeletekeep it up
and for god sake
be happy :P
Cindrella..>>well yeah it's actually for you and others from who I know..:)
ReplyDeleteNada...>> Dear I couldn't find words that describes my love for you friend <3
Oxy..>> thanks honey ...and since you're seveteen I hope you liked it :p
Xerox...thank a lot ...lol and please don't imitate me :p (just kidding)..
Khalil..>> thanks ..well I'm happy but I like to keep my happiness shown with a smile:) and I always like to write the sorrow for it to don't last but for a while..:)
it's like I get rid of it.