Tears Why can't I stop you?!!
In the middle of no where.. I started to whine**
I've been through a life that never been fine
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I'm about to fall over the edge I'm standing on
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I've lost my soul..nothing is to be left ..everything is gone
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I'm found by sorrow.. found by pain
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Tears why can't I stop you..why a smile is so hard to gain
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Tears why can't you stop..why are you so vain
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I guess it's because.. life & death are now for me the same
It has been along while since you last wrote something that sad, anyway it so great maybe it describes how we feel these days but the wise person should not be so pessimistic.
ReplyDeleteMy advice is to let go these bad feelings and always look at the bright side, even in your writings, besides that it is a great poem and I really like it.
Cinderella as I said for others before...writing the sorrow means getting rid of it... and it also means I'm ready to move on leaving my sorrow behind me ingraved in letters..
ReplyDeletei'm glad your back ... it has been so long
ReplyDeleteabout the poem , you know how much i like your writing style .. but this one misses alot of hope in a coming happy life that i'm sure you'll lead...
just like what cinderalla said: look at the bright side
love you both
I love Both of you too^_^
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